Under Jersey Skies - Comments

Hey!!! The ending was amazing, truly brilliant story. A sequel would be amazing xxx

That was an amazing story. Keep up the good work and I wish you sucess on all of your other stories as well! =D

GAHH!
AMAZING UPDATES!
I LOVED the reference to mean girls, and those all of the dresses were amazing.
And her hair!
I love her hair!
Ray was so sweet to Danica :)
The way he paused before he said "beautiful" melted my little heart!
I cannot wait for the last chapter!
I am so friggin anxious!
AMAZING JOB!!

OH HOLY BALLS.
Excuse my outburst, but this is a fine story you have here ma'am.
I must thank you for directing me here, because this is great work!
I cannot wait until the next update.
Dont ever change your writing style because I absolutely adore it!!
This is really a good story, Id say one of the best I have read on here!
Keep up the amazing work :D
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Haha, it's almost finished actually XD

I'm excited to see where this will be going :)
Please update soon!!!
& I'm subscribing!

Amazing story! =) Really can't wait to read more, please update soon!!!! =) <3

Give.
Me.
MORE!!
:D

alright. i've got two points here.
one - i stayed up all night reading this. seriously, didn't even get any sleep. why sleep when there's mibba-ing to do?
and two- which shall be slightly longer than point one.
i'm going to offer you some author to author advice. i don't do this often because i usually get annoyed at people bitching me out about it afterwards, but eh, i haven't sleep and it seems like a good idea right now.
never, ever, EVER yell at your readers. ever. even if they don't comment. you get more comments with sweetness, not bitterness.
you should be more concerned about writing for yourself, and the enjoyment of others, rather than writing for comments. not saying that's what you're doing, but damn if it doesn't look like it to outsiders.
just simply say, "hey, i'd like to know how you guys feel about this. i noticed some of you haven't been commenting as much lately, and i'd love to know how i'm doing on this. thank you!" or something along those lines. i can gurantee that people might feel more inclined to comment. and with 59 chapters and 90-something comments? i'd say you're doing pretty good so far. :)
also, author's notes are not allowed to be posted as chapters. i'm just letting you know so someone doesn't come along and report you for it and all your hard work is wasted.
keep going, you've gone too far to just give up because some people decide to be silent readers, which sometimes isn't a bad thing. i know i don't comment as much on stories i'm subscribed to because i don't know what to say, or how to say it, or i'm just shy.
yes, me, shy. if you knew me you'd know how insane that sounds.
ttyl, broski. :)

I love this story!

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Oh my goood, this story is amazing.
It's definitely not your typical MCR fan-fic. It totally has a good story line too.
I'm sorry, I know I haven't been reading and commenting properly, but I promise I'll start. Cuz I love this story too much to piss off the writer. :D
I absolutely love this. It's some of your best work. :)

I have a problem. x) I told myself after I read one of your other stories I'd start reading the books I checked out from the library. And then I go to your page and see you have another story. And I'm just like bvdfhuincmkvfjbhuugfnucfmvkir.
I'm obsessed with fanfiction.

I love this story though.

Lmfao, more to come shortly, my friend :)

Okay so as you know Shazza, I literally had to re-read this from the start because I forgot where I was up to, this story, yeah it's like fucking AMAZING to be honest, that's actually an understatement, GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS HOE!! <3

Maliella Misery <3

Took you long enough! XD
Nice update
Finally an ending soon... yayz
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Cute update :)

love the update :D

I really hope that you update soon, this is a really good story. :] Made me cry a little, how could Gerard be so stupid? But it was really good. :]

Chapter 19, the best. :] Girl playing WoW <3 Just made my day! XD

Please tell me that you're not gonna use a really quick ending because when people do that it comes out shit. I don't want this story to come out shit because the rest of it was soo good!!!
Ohh and Merry Christmas!! I got 'The Black Parade is DEAD!' ... It's freaking awewsome!!
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