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  • Winterfell

    Winterfell (100)

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    You are amazing with words and describing. I can feel the character. Ever planning to write anymore? Because that would be amazing
    June 20th, 2013 at 12:45am
  • Josipa

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    My god, thank you so much! I'm glad you noticed his smartness. I wanted to portray him that way since he's a journalist, has connections and covers crime. He's always one step ahead of everyone.

    Thank you again (:
    October 30th, 2009 at 04:49pm
  • dr. faustus

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    You have a way with words. I couldn't stop reading...everything was done so beautifully.
    I love a good crime story, I love how smart this man was. Every word was gripping and I cound't wait till the end. Favorite line.

    "He was afraid; not of getting caught but not succeeding. He had it in his mind; but that’s the only spot he had it in. That’s all he had. Thoughts and fantasies of - killing. Until now."
    October 30th, 2009 at 01:45am