Thank God It's Friday. - Comments

I liked this a lot. Everything about it was amazing. (: You're really an amazing writer.

I like like like it.

This was... magical. Those last two lines gave shivers. Your writing is beautiful. It's... Better than that of many publishing authors. Perfect.
<3

Beautiful. The right person won.
This was absolutely stunning.
Personally, I believe that was so perfect you should print it out, hang it on your wall, and draw a big fat smile over your success.
And after that's done, you should mail William a copy. I think even he would love this.
=]

OH. MY. GOD.
DUDE.
WHAT?!?
NO.
HOW?
WHAT?
WHO?
THIS IS SO FREAKING AMAZING!
HOLY JESUS!!!
AND I'M GLAD YOU WON ^^
AMAZING ONE SHOT ANNIE!!!

So, in case you didn't know; YOU WON THE CONTEST! : D

Even though this was a het, I didn't care because of your writing style. Everything was incredibly descritive and the semantics of the words chosen was well-placed.
Lines like, William's Thursday nights were always hungry. and It wasn't in their chemical makeup to play things safe. kept me reading; I loved every line of this story and I was drawn in to reading it from the begginning.
If one didn't know the nature of the song, they couldn't avoid it after reading this. Though I wish it were longer, it's like the short and abrupt nature of the oneshot brings it all together- amazing, really.
Thanks so much for giving me this. (:

Even if it was short, I absolutely loved this. It was perfect for the song.

Amazing, as always.
Good Luck :)

Wow.
That was perfect. Like, not even one mistake.
And it was really well written. (:
Great job! <3