I've Been Waiting Far Too Long to Feel the Sun on My Back. - Comments

I think I'm PMSing or something
because I'm usually not this emotional.
But that made me cry it was sad and sweet
like a lot of the stories I've been reading.
Not that that was like anything I've ever read.
anyway, I'm rambling.
Wonderful. - Annie

O.O

This was amazing <3

I loved it, it was beautifully written.
I wish I had a talent like you do.
Keep writing dear, you have skill.

---JAzz

Ahh, oh my gosh, that was so gorgeous. I think it fit the song well, and it was just so full of emotion, all the way through - frustration, worry, dread, love, lust, despair, sadness. Just, wow.
I loved it. :)

I'm entirely...wow. This story was perfect for the song, well written with any grammar and spelling mistakes few and far between. One thing I noticed what a lot of misuse of homophones, which can be hard sometimes. We really got to know the characters. I love how you interpreted this, and just to add; the layout was lovely.

So uh.... There goes my chance of winning.....