Translucent - Comments

i love this story.
its been forever.
i still reread this whenever i cant find something good.
i feel like this made history.
im ganna be subscribed till im 50 even tho you may never update again.
its that great

i love this story.
its been forever.
i still reread this whenever i cant find something good.
i feel like this made history.
im ganna be subscribed till im 50 even tho you may never update again.
its that great

I loved this! It was great. I just..really loved it!

That was amazing!

Love it!
Just found, read, and am now commenting.
//.^

This was amazing
To amazing for words.
It made my day :)

That was absolutely adorable. :3

I loved this story. it was amazing!! =]

OH EM GEE LOVE IT greaaaaaaat ending soo cute, just an all round cute story ^-^

amazing. (:

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

this.
was.
so.
so.
so.
so.
so.
so.
so.
so.
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeeeey!
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!

<3.

D: oveeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!
asdfiuadshff.

grrr.

but it was a cute story
<33

The ending was cuteeee. (:
I loved this story so much.

I loved it. (:
the ending was great.

Awe overall this story was really good...and cute
LOVED the whole thing!

The ending was cute. ESPECIALLY THE ZOMBIE TEACHER SHIT.

Awh this is was a cute story!!
Lucian and Davie <33

Ahhh so cute! Love the ending! It was awesome :D

This is such a cute story.
All of the characters have extremely distinct personalities, and that's hard to come by.
You're a really good writer.
I'm looking forward to your next update.

Wow,
Girl i have missed readin your stories ayee,
I love 'em, all the slashy goodness, haha.
Im currently making my way through your list of stories,
Sorry if i dont leave comments on all of them, XD

xx
Ry.