Miss You Sevenfold - Comments

Chapter one- Aww, that was sad. :( When a new person speaks, though, you should make a new paragraph.

Chapter two- The ending wsa so cute. It made me smile. :]

Chapter three- The black text is kind of hard to read. :\ Oh, and "lapse" has an "e" on the end. :] And this was so sad! :(

You did a really good job with this. :]

Awww! That was so sad, but very good!

that last chapter has me in tears!