Long Road to Ruin - Comments

Oh my goodness. That was wonderful. I could see everything happening in my head. Your descriptions for everything were so brutal and yet perfect.

Oh. My. God. This is just simply genius!! Your way of describing, the dialogue and the form of writing just adds on to a wonderful plot!! The first chapter just sucks you in to this sort of dark and leery story. The plot is simply amazing and the layout adds on to this feel the whole story emits. Wonderful, simply wonderful!! Keep it up!!

You never disappoint.

I loved, as usual, the creepy and dangerous feel of the story. I swear, you could publish these stories and make a fortune. The dialog rocked, and the plot was very smooth feeling. And by the end of it, I was quite fond of all the characters (I knew Sam was no good!) I liked your choice of layout, since it matches the story’s feel pretty nicely but still makes it easy to read (I’ve been having a bit of trouble with layouts making stories unreadable lately.) You have quite a talent for writing.

All in all, this would probably be one of my favorites by you, and I wish I’d found it when it was still running.

This is insanely good. I love your descriptions, dialogue and characters.
You have an exceptional talent for writing.

I really liked this!
I think the characters were well developed and natural. And the plot was great! The description was amazing!

I really enjoyed this :)
It was very different than most of the stories I've read, and held a lot more action.
Your characters were great, as was your plot.
Very well done :)

I really enjoyed this, it kept me interested throughout and your characters were developed really well. I don't have a bad thing to say about this :)

This was awesome, it really was.
The plot kept me on the edge of my seat which I loved.
Story line and characters were very well thought out.

Wonderful job. (:

Nick and Skeeter so remind me of Bones and Booth.
^.^

I love it.

Thank you for your comments :D

awesome story. really good to read. descriptive and fits the mood perfectly. good characters they are well thought out and so is the story line.

I liked the description and layout, please continue =D
Very good, I really liked it.

I loved it and I agree. ^^

The way you described things was incredible.

your writing is so clean and done so well.
You can definitely make a profession out of it.

I enjoyed reading this