I think that one of them should have something wrong with them and almost dies but then he/she lives.Except when it's born it has a disability. And it should be boy/girl :)
i think its name should be - anna if it is a girl (but anna wasnt in te story long) or rebecca.(idk y it just fits well) - or the dead twin dosentgive the living one room to grow so it passes away. - or for a boy i think... damion (nate wouldlike that)
Aw! Theres only one heart beat?? Thats super sadd... I hate Chris...just thought I would let you know that, : ) Amazing Chapter!! = ) Update soon please?!? : D I can't last long without this story!! = D
Haven't actually read the story yet, just the summary. I think the sentences were slightly repetitive. Haha, I only clicked this story because I was eating a cupcake for breakfast as I browsed mibba stories.
Ah! The baby should be a girl... Then it can't be all, what if I will grow up to be a raper just like my dad...Well she could but it would be a little diffrent cause you don't see many female rapist. Great chapter! I am happy she kept the baby = D