The Federation - Comments

okay i finished! :D the plot was kind of cliche but it was awesome none the less :D
i was glad she and Jimmy made up. I was starting to miss him. :3

Currently im on CH.15. :D so good.
But something kinda tells me Jimmy is right about Carter.
(i knew a guy named Carter once, he was an ass :P). False covers fo sho.
I hope Asher realizes that. It was sad when she realized that everything she with JSull was over :(
I hope they reconcile :D
Toodles till i get further in.

I've loved this story from the start, thought it was such a brilliant idea!
Loved the way you've ended it too :) xx

Oh my! I completely forgot about that offer! : ) I can't wait to see where that goes, also awh to Matt and the statement about the deathbat cut ring, haha. Jimmy and her are all good again, yay!

i love it update soon!!!!!

Finally, thanks to a snow day I've found the time to catch up! I'm so sorry for being so slow with keeping up with this! And now I've caught up there's only one chapter left!!!

Loved it though hun, I'm glad Asher and Jimmy have sorted things out and are going to be together again :)

Amazing update as usual. I really thought it was adorable. The dress was pretty cute as well. Though on the story sake, I love how Joan was portrayed in this one. : )

*sigh* Now I want gummy bears.
I loved the update.

XoXo
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it was good.
=) ♥ +jazzi

Not only was it a cute update, it was sweet and explained a lot I had been waiting for. : ) In other words I loved it as usual.

Loved it. He would be proud that he got to kick mega ass.

XoXo
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Yes! Jimmy came to the rescue! : ) : ) Got to love the author's note as well. Nothing like kicking ass beyond the grave, haha. : )

Sorry I haven't commented for a while. I'm just now catching up on what I've missed. I am clever aren't I? I was right too! He was a closet jerk!

XoXo
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Amazing update. No he took her! : (

Well that was a good update.
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Love it! keep it going.

Amazing as always. Glad to see some of her old fellow trainees: ie: Tuck, Hayley, : )

Thank the lord for Joshua is all I can say!! At first I was concerned that maybe he was leading Asher astray with what he told her about Carter and the Federation, but it seems as though there is some hope after all that they can overthrow Carter and save The Legion :)

Wonderful updates as always hun, loved them :) xx

Carter's a bastard. I really hate him now. Thanks so much for making him a horrible man. Man I hate to say it but Jimmy was right. Good update.
=) ♥ +jazzi

I loved it, poor Joshua was it? Poor guy, he made me laugh when he said something along the lines of "i'm more normal then my brother" or something, haha. : )