The Federation - Comments

Wow I had a feeling Jimmy was right about Carter

That vase thing was pretty badass too bad it failed

Loved the update and the vase thing. Call me the villian lover, but I am still Team Carter for some odd reason. : )

Ah, evil evil man. He can still be a sweet hot evil man though. : ) haha.
I don't know why but this makes me think of the A7X song um...A little peice of Heaven..I think thats it? B/c hes evil and I can see her killing Carter and keeping a picture as a tribute.Yea, I know i'm weird, haha. : )
Loved it though.

GRRR. Carter should be a sweet pea, but I kind of figured that he would end up being evil and most likely working for the Jonas and Miley corporation. I just kind of wished he wasn't. It's saddens me. =( Good update though.
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I loved Joan in this. She made me smile so much; same for Carter. : )

Uhh, good update. I wish Mayday Parade was in the Legion, I lovers them. But anyways, Joan brags, I lover it. Good update. I realize I said that twice too. =D
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Why do I get the feeling that introducing Carter to The Legion and allowing him to join is going to prove to be a huge mistake? There's something about his enthusiasm that doesn't sit well...

Anyway, yet another fabulous update my dear, can't wait for more :) xx

Nooooooooo
I bet he's a spy of some kind!
Get rid and go back to Jimbob =)

I actually really feel for Jimmy right now because I'm convinced that he's right in his assumptions regarding Carter and that he really is just looking out for Asher. However, I guess she's old enough to make her own decisions, no matter what. And Carter being introduced to the Legion....why do I feel this may be the beginning of some drama?

Brilliant updates as always hun...glad I've finally caught up! :) xx

Loved it. *waits* Now i'm curious if hes going to terrorize the legion from the inside out. : )

“It’s okay, baby,” Carter assured me. “I don’t care that you’re a stripper by night and superhero by midnight. I’ll keep quiet if you keep the lap dances coming.” I think that could be a hit song. Some rock and that would be part of the chorus witht the song being named Keep the Lap Dances Coming. Anyways I love this story. And YAY LEGION FOR CARTER!!! I'm so on team Carter. It makes me happy they're together. Although it'd be cool if Asher and Jimmy could still be friends, but they can't because Jimmy is a jealous whore. HAHA jk anyways great update.
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So, Carter's being introduced to the Legion hey? Hmmm....I'm still not totally convinced by him...
although I could be completly wrong....

Loved it :)

Oh wowzers I haven't commented in forever. I'm quite sorry for that. Anyways, Jimmy was such a doof the whole time. Yay for Carter and Asher. I really feel bad that Jimmy can't be happy for them, maybe it's because he still has feelings for Asher, and he knows he made a mistake by breaking up with her. Hrmm I don't know. Hopefully it ends happily ever after with Asher and Carter together forever. But it probably won't.
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They're engaged!!!! I'm happy for them I really am, if Carter makes her happy then fine...but I still have this awful gut feeling that Jimmy's right about Carter....
Loved it hun, looking forward to see what happens next :)

ahh...amazing! : ) : )

Wow, the emotion was amazing. Zacky was a bit of a bitch in this one though. Loved it.

BUT BUT BUT NO! Jimmy and Asher can't be completely over! I forbid it!

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Part of me really hopes that Jimmy is right about Carter so that he can stop looking like the crazy jealous ex-boyfriend!

Love all three updates hun, more soon?

I am in love with this chapter. It made me smile for some reason.

God I can't decide which guy is better

I hope Carter isn't one of those "To good to be true" guys