Slipping Away - Comments

  • PensRock

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    I love this! I'm so jealous. I can't write a one shot to save my life. This was so good, and I love happy endings.
    October 28th, 2009 at 11:25am
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Wow, this story was just amazing! It was sad yes but the end was just amazing! Couldn't ask for anything more. You really did a good job with it! LOVE ITTT! Good luck in the contest! =DDD
    October 25th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • x.sketch.mania

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    this was sooo good!!!
    sad, but it ended perfectly.

    “You don't have to be perfect, Kris. Just be that guy I fell in love with.”
    This made me smile.
    October 24th, 2009 at 04:49pm
  • headintheclouds

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    that was really good! i really enjoyed it!
    October 24th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • LetangLuv58

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    Wow I really really LOVED your story!!!!!!!!!! Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
    October 23rd, 2009 at 10:22pm
  • roxy278

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    That was amazing! Loved it! =]
    October 23rd, 2009 at 08:26am
  • dreamerforever

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    Aww...I loved it. It's as simple as that.
    October 23rd, 2009 at 04:15am
  • sukiedancer21

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    I loooiove it. She was so sad. I kinds wish you would turn it into a series to see if he's still an ass, but anyways ... I love it :)
    October 23rd, 2009 at 02:21am