y'know carrie. i don't see why you don't write more often love, you're fucking brilliant. this chapter was so great. and all that talk about you thinking lucy was a mary jane/jane doe? (lol i think that's not even what it's called but you know what i mean) has completely gone out the window. her character showed in this chapter, and well. and it seems to me that oliver is being nice because she is dating tom and tom does really like her, but i think he's got something up his sleeve. but that's just me. great update, loooove
that was sooooooooo cute! :3 tom and lucy are adorable! i love this! he needs to ask her out like now, he must! & just some constructive-ness, perhaps you should space out your paragpraphs a bit more instead of it being blocks and a new line after someone speaks too! i caaaaaaaant wait to find out what happens cause i have no idea! i swear there are more secerts to come, or something is going to happen, drama perhaps? i think i can smell it! you're writing is amazzzzzzzing, update soon okay! ill be waiting :D
Hahaha, oh my fucking God. When you wrote about the way Oli was eating, I was laughing so hard. :D And by the way, even though I'm upset I won't be seeing this story for a while, the ending to that was so fucking cute seriously. :D
awh! cute c: tom is getting all love-struck with her! eeep, she is about to meet his family! i wonder how that is going to go down! update again soon! this story is so cute. i hope that tom asks her to be his girlfriend soon, i also wonder what she will say! & will tom be able to stay faithful to her?! oh the drama! i love it.
Okay so i just read this whole thing in a time-span of 15 minutes (: and I have to say that i absolutely love this! it's adorable, and it makes me 'awe' every time I read it.
Awwwwwwwwwwwww!! That was adorable. In every way. I want to say update soon, but I know you're schedule. Can't wait til next Wednesday! :D <3333333333333333333333
Tom is so adorable. I love how he's trying so hard; it makes me smile. Update soon, missy! Now that I'm actually catching up on all the stories I've subscribed to, I don't want to have to wait too long for this one! hahaha.
They're so cute. I swear. And this party is still making me nervous. And I really feel like kicking Elle in the face. I thought Matt had better taste in girls. D: Haha.