October 29th, 2009 at 12:33am
First off---love the banner! =D
Okay, okay, the content. Right.
“Because Sonny was good at staring and William was fantastic to stare at.”
True dat.
“Sonny had to resist the urge to let his booted foot fly into William’s stomach.”
*Hits Sonny with rolled up newspaper” No! Don’t even think about that. Bad.
““I like it when you’re dominant, Billy.””
Me too. ;D
“It’s William’s turn to be surprised when Sonny’s hips grind down softly into his, the sudden contact forces a moan of his mouth and he feels Sonny smirking into their kiss.
William’s feeling amazingly confident now and he lets his hands trail down Sonny’s back and then grasp Sonny’s firm ass tightly.
Sonny moans into William’s mouth and grinds his hips forward again.
The kissing continues, gradually getting rougher as Sonny’s hands find themselves trailing down William’s lanky body and then coming into contact with a belt buckle that proves to be no challenge at all.
Sonny’s hands are dipping in and out of William’s skin tight skinny jeans before William pulls away and whispers, “Best secret I ever told,” against Sonny’s lips with a mischievous glint in his warm brown eyes.”
Well now, you’ve gotten me all hot and bothered.
Alright, lets kepe this proffesional.
I do love a dominant William. It’s like…whenever there is an awkward, seemingly submissive, person---like Mikey Way, or William Beckett, or Ryan Ross--- I always imagine them as being dominant in bed. And the converse is true as well, give me a confident, seemingly dominant, person---like Gerard Way, Sonny Moore, or Gabe Saporta--- and I always imagine them as the submissive.
Oh, and to answer your question from the post (even though you tent a different way entirely) they didn’t have to be together, there just had to be feelings towards eachother, known or unknown by the pair, as long as it is clear to the reader.
One thing, not crit, but more personal. William being called ‘Billy’. I know it’s a nickname form someone named William but, I don’t know, its weird. XD Like, I always call him either William or Bilvy, which really isn’t different. I know, I’m strange. But whenever I say Billy I either think of a hick or Billy from The Grim Adventures Of Billy And Mandy.
Anyway. I really like this. My only REAL crit is that I think it could be a little longer. I do like it the way it is, definitely, but if you wanted to make it maybe a paragraph or two longer and did so by Sunday, then it would be fine.
See, I’m doing the judging weird because I know that after I post something I usually change it XD
So as long as people have made all their changes and submitted it by 1am on Sunday then it will be judged as such. Cause I read all the entries again before I pick winners and whatnot.
Anyway, I’m rambling a lot…Good job!
Especially because I gave you a pretty hard pairing, compared to the others. Like, I’m not even sure if The Academy Is… or From First To Last (or Sonny’s solo thing) have even been on tour together, the only thing that came to mind was maybe Warped Tour. I have no idea if Sonny and William have ever even met. But this was good. You definitely took advantage of the age. Loved. Good job. I’m really glad you entered.
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Katie D R E A M I N G
Ilove!!!
I haven't seen a Sonny fic in so long!