April 2nd, 2010 at 09:37am
YES! Going on tour finally? Well. Not on the nicest of circumstances, but its nice shes taking a break. And the Ways should be pretty sympithetic.
By the way, I'll be editor if ya want:)
Where The Shock Sets In - Comments
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March 30th, 2010 at 08:28pm
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SO it took me a while before I could read this one. It was great. Made me cry no doubt but still wonderful...Now go on tour with the boys...February 16th, 2010 at 04:06am
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ilovethis.February 15th, 2010 at 03:48pm
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Oh my, thats so sad :(
I couldnt imagine if that happened to me D:
More? xxFebruary 15th, 2010 at 03:36pm -
Love the story so far:) But: oh shit oh shit.February 15th, 2010 at 01:29pm
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Oh...That was such a sad chapter T-T
I do hope the next one makes up for all the tears.
Keep up the wonderful work
Update soon ^_^February 15th, 2010 at 01:05pm -
I love this story!
I love all the detail you put into your chapters!
Update soon yeah?January 31st, 2010 at 07:36am -
I forgive you this time my friend...but UPDATE again...please. I so don't want to hold your eyeliner or cell phone hostage.HeheheJanuary 29th, 2010 at 04:16pm
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O-oh. Whats wrong with her mom?
i hope she's fine.
More updates? XDJanuary 29th, 2010 at 04:15pm -
i love this so damn much.
update soonxoDecember 13th, 2009 at 10:08pm -
there is nothing i dont like except the slow updates - which i understand. please hurry though!!! i cant wait for the nxt updateDecember 13th, 2009 at 05:56am
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YAY! Updated. I love this story. She goes on tour I hope. Saying no is just crazy talk.LOLDecember 11th, 2009 at 06:43pm
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nice chapter :)
well i guess she'll meet Frank, right?
more updates please! xxDecember 9th, 2009 at 03:43pm -
update soon please!November 22nd, 2009 at 05:20pm
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Chapter 5;
You're the spawn of the devil. I did have a witty comment about being related to a certain someone but I thought that might have been a tad too harsh.
Frank was adorkable with how excited he got.
He was probably planning all the fun things they would do on tour together.
But no, Ollie had to go crush those plans.
What a wet blanket, hmph.
I'm now officially up to date, yes?
I hope you make me wrong and update again soon.November 15th, 2009 at 06:01am -
Chapter 4;
Why yes, I will keep commenting until I am up to date.
I must be annoying you with all these comments at once.
Suck it up, princess :)
Anyway, just like you adore comments, I adore this chapter.
Her mother is a bit of a worry wart, hm?
Adele is cute in this chapter, with the wheel chair.
And good on Ollie for telling her mother to call her Ollie instead of Olive!
You love cliffhangers, don't you?November 15th, 2009 at 05:58am -
Chapter 3;
Frank seems to be a bit shaken by the accident, yes?
It makes him seem so cute with the way he babbles on about how sorry he is.
Execellent chapter, I adore your use of description.November 15th, 2009 at 05:54am -
Chapter 2;
:Tehehehe: You already know where I stand on Adele.
The shifty garage name made me giggle, yes, I did just write giggle.
Good description of the accident, keep up the amazing work, dear!November 15th, 2009 at 05:52am -
Chapter 1;
It's a nice opening and I like it how her life was compared to 'Fresh Prince of Bel-Air'.
The theme song for that is great.
Anywho, it's interesting to see that it looks as if you're starting at the end and then re-telling the story.November 15th, 2009 at 05:50am
I'm glad Ollie is getting better.
Frank's already left for his tour hasn't he? :(
Anyway, if you like I'll be your editor?
Sorry that your last one ditched you.
Anyway, can't wait for the next update :)