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  • StallionDuckie6661

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    I love it Darlin'!
    I love Chance! He's just too cute!!
    November 4th, 2009 at 12:48am
  • a venom

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    loved the update
    can't wait for the next one
    November 4th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    hahaha Brian just wont give up.. though they would look beautiful together xD
    November 4th, 2009 at 12:01am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    Awwww poor Brian D=
    Thinks the girl he wants to fuck has a family xD
    November 3rd, 2009 at 07:15am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    nine: Found one mistake in this one; minor though so no worry...

    1) {...I'm not really long how long that process takes.} just take out the first long and replace it with sure.

    Other than that; a WICKEDLY hilarious chapter. Favorite would have to be their phone conversastion where he says the bit** has returned and where she says that the a**hole never left. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:35am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    eight: Great chapter. Loved how he's still being the cocky rockstar that he always is. Wonder what's going to happen next. Can't believe I forgot to mention this; on the chapter where he's in the hospital and wants out; LOVED his rockstar hissy fit.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:27am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    seven: Loved how he made his apperance known. Wonder what's going to happen now? Can't wait.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:20am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    You've done an amazing job so far Whit!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:54am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    six: First off, found two things wrong. Nothing really big; just minor stuff...

    1) {"I have not better to fucking do!...} just add thing to not.
    2) on the part where their talking about his dad on tour with Jeff and where he says 'Yeah, maybe' and then went into thing about the puppets; you left the sentence unfinished.

    Other than that; liking this at the moment. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:51am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    five: Awesomeness chapter. Loved how she told him off. I kept forgetting that the banner is Wickedly Awesome as well. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:43am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    four: Wonder how are his friends and fiance going to get there? What's Mal going to say when she tells her? Can't wait to read and find out.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:38am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    three: Syn should have listened to Zacky; but oh well. Liked the line where he thought: ...return home to the devil he's engaged to. Wonder whose going to find him? Can't wait to find out.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:33am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    LOVEIT
    HA poor brian thinkking she ismarried
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:26am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: Great intro for Syn. Wonder what's going to happen on Friday? Can't wait to read and find out.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:25am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    Sounds interesting. Another excellent plot. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:19am
  • a venom

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    can't wait for the next chapter
    more soon?
    November 3rd, 2009 at 03:58am
  • sensiblehearts

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    You have fast updates :)
    That's good, very good haha
    Awesome chapter !!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 02:48am
  • Ierogurl90

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    Very cute!:)
    Brian is a cute asshole!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 11:51pm
  • dinugget

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    Haha
    Brian think shes fucking married !
    Cracks me up
    November 2nd, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • Maggie526

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    What woman in their right mind with a husbund and kids would be in a music video, skanky looking and leather clad? Men can be stupid sometimes, even the ones that are fictional(well, sorta)
    November 2nd, 2009 at 10:22pm
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