Meeting for the Last Time - Comments

  • The Way

    The Way (1400)

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    Wow.
    I can't believe no one else bothered to write about Matt.
    This is original and refreshing and it even makes you think.

    On the subject of narration and description, it was pretty average, but what I applaud is the overall concept. The very thought of them meeting and their reactions.

    Gerard's contentment was well-versed and even Matt's slight sadness and aversion at the band moving on without him, yet trying to live all the same... that's what made this good. Sometimes we really just forget about the second founding member of MCR since he left, but we can't say he didn't do his part too. And I'm sure that even if at one point we all wondered where he is and what he's thinking about the band becoming so big, no one else bothered to formulate a plot and write about it.

    It was kind of sad, kind of happy, pretty content. Sweet, succint, simple.

    Good job. Smiley
    February 21st, 2008 at 05:14pm
  • Toro's Way

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    That was really good
    Nice idea too
    I wonder if they will actually do that :D
    xxx
    September 17th, 2007 at 05:41pm
  • Teh Manda

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    Okay, ive honestly nothing bad to say about this story.
    Except: Lyn-Z plays bass not guitar
    other than that.
    Good Job
    Update soon.
    September 17th, 2007 at 02:20pm