Escape - Comments

I loved the way you described everything.
I could visualize everything with the way you wrote.
It was amazing.

Those descriptions were just... Epic. You're vocab is brilliant. It was all worded so beautifully I don't think I can give a real criticism, so take that as a compliment :)
But really, this was just amazing, I love HP fanfics and this was Perfect.

I love Potter fics and yours are amazing.

This was really sweet and it was worded perfectly.

Loved it.

Aw, that was so sweet! I've never really watched Harry Potter, but I STILL love this. It's so beautiful. You are an EXCELLENT writer, and your descriptions are gorgeous. I felt as if I was in the rain with her.

And as if she needed reminding, her hands drop subconsciously to her stomach, where her nightdress clang and creased over the swollen lump there. She gasps, her breath catching on the passing raindrops, now beginning to slow down and pass on, as she feels movement over where her hands are.

I especially loved that part. GORGEOUS. Great job!

This is so pretty and painted a vivid picture in my mind.
I loved the way you described her dancing. It was beautiful.
And aww at the baby. Yet, him leaving was sad.
This was a lovely one shot.

Great Contest entry! I really enjoyed it.

One shot for one shot

I have no idea why no one else has commented this. It was truly amazing.
I just love how you describe the rain. Hell, I love all your description, but the rain bit is just beautiful.
The whole thing flows so easily, like rain. Lol. No, seriously, it does.
Another thing I love about this is how well the character comes across in such a short space of time, and without dialogue.
It's so perfect, but so sad as well. I'm guessing Lupin's dead? How could you, woman?! But it was really sad, to see her misery at losing him.
It's a perfect ending, with the alluding to the fact that she's pregnant. You imply a lot, rather than actually saying it. It's really clever, and I like it.
So yeah. This was so sweet, so sad and so perfectly written. I loved it.