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  • Nueroticdramatic

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    :) thanks. It's actually supposed to be 2 girls but I didn't really bother to make that clear.

    It really is an amazing song (Y).
    October 1st, 2007 at 04:11am
  • Mouse

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    I like the way you write, in this straight way, like dealing with facts..It makes it honest and real.
    I especially like how you used the 'How unchristian' remark.
    Oddly enough, I started feeling sorry for the girl... And it is interesting how it seems that the boy is getting somewhat like the girl by the end of the story (or was that just my interpretation?)
    Oh and that song is rather awesome. :]
    September 28th, 2007 at 01:05am
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