hey this was a pretty good start! i like the concept. i only read the first chapter so far, i'll read more later. very good, just a few grammar mistakes here and there. good job =]
November 26th, 2007 at 08:36am
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awesome! write moreNovember 22nd, 2007 at 07:31pm
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...Woooooooow...
Muy buen!!!
More soooooooooon...please???November 22nd, 2007 at 08:26am -
This is so awesome!!! yeah i can comment on new chapter. How many chapters are you going to make or "aiming" for? I am adicted!November 22nd, 2007 at 05:52am
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awesomesauce story dude..just awesomesauce 8)
November 21st, 2007 at 09:13pm -
I just fell in love with this!!! I just subscribed. :]November 21st, 2007 at 10:52am
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cool story ^_^
i love Peeps. it's such a cool book and puts a twist on your average vampire story. have you read the sequel?November 5th, 2007 at 06:10am -
De nada.- ravi816:
Thanks- ABleedingBlackRose:
- Wow...your stroy rocks!
=)
Do you really think so?
And Si. It's fantastical!October 28th, 2007 at 01:44am -
Looooove it!!!
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Absolutely awesome update!October 28th, 2007 at 01:43am -
i love it
tell me when there's more
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rating ^^^^October 22nd, 2007 at 08:45am -
This is interesting =D
Maybe if it wasn't so clustered it would be easier to follow (or am i just tired?) lol
Yeah and there are afew spelling mistakes, but other then that. it's good. XDOctober 19th, 2007 at 01:24pm -
Thanks, and I will be sure to do that- Trippy:
- **new reader**
this is pretty good
tell me when you update
**holds up sign with a 10 on it**
October 8th, 2007 at 07:03am -
**new reader**
this is pretty good
tell me when you update
**holds up sign with a 10 on it**October 8th, 2007 at 06:51am -
Thanks- ABleedingBlackRose:
- Wow...your stroy rocks!
=)
Do you really think so?October 5th, 2007 at 05:18am -
Wow...your stroy rocks!October 4th, 2007 at 09:31am
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Thanks again- ravi816:
- Thank you very much.
I will do that.
I appricate the advice.
:D
For the advice
:DSeptember 22nd, 2007 at 11:27am -
Thank you very much.
I will do that.
I appricate the advice.
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That was good.
It could do with some proper formatting though, you should space some of your paragraphs out. It would make it much easier to understand. But other than that, I found nothing wrong with it, it was good and original.
And if you're basing it on "Peeps" make sure to state it more clearly, people can get a miscomseption about it.
:)
Good Job.September 21st, 2007 at 09:36am
