LOVE IT!!! please update as soon as possible. i love how you have already set out the differences between each character that makes them, them. And please do not make them rush into a relationship, i like jealously beforehand;)
I just wanted to say that I really do enjoy this story and I don't know where you are with it or if you will continue it but I hope you do because it has some real good potential. Just thought I'd tell you in case you didn't already know that. ;]
Your style of writing is very concise and to the point. It's definitely one of the easier stories I've read. And I don't mean that in a bad way, I mean there isn't so much stuff going on all at once and so many unnecessary details that the real story gets lost and confused. Maybe I'm mistaken, but the story seems to be fairly original, which is definitely something admirable. Overall, I love where this story is going, but more importantly, I love how it's getting there.
love this story and love love loveeeed this chapter, it was nice that brendon and dani got to talk, and finding out about dani and roxanne, :) update soon please please!!!!!!
I'm still interested in this one!! I loved it! I like how you are going to develop it and not rush into the relationship, like most people do! This story is really good! I love how Dani and Roxy are so different,' as I have said before!!
Awww he makes her nerrrrrvous! Can't say I blame her...I would be too if Brendon Urie caught me almost crashing through a counter with expensive and pretty cameras. Loved the update :D