I Put on a Brave Face - Comments

This made me get butterflies in my stomach and then they left, when you decided to make it a dream. Thanks for that.

So I liked it, for real :)

i loved it :) it was amazing...yet sad )`:

I liked it :] I never would've thought that the whole thing was going to end up as a dream. I should've caught onto it though. I should've known. Only someone evil like you would destroy something so wonderful like a fairytale. HAHA, just kidding. Well, the overall plot was good and I liked the fact that it fit into homecoming season. There were some pretty laughable moments, but the one that caught my eye the most was the part where Joe says, "You're killing me here." It reminded me of this Sit-N-Sleep commercial that always played, and the guy in the commercial would always say, "YOU'RE KILLING ME LARRY!" However, in the beginning of one-shot, there were a few simple sentences that I thought could've have been combined with other sentences. But other than that, everything else was good. (:

I think this is the longest contest comment I've written so far out of the three I've looked over so far.
Yeah.

That was really, really sad.
I was so happy and then BAM.
It's a dream?!
Haha, mystery meat... it's a good thing I don't eat meat. :]]]
Oh gosh, but that's so unfortunate that Joe is such a butt head. Whyyy?

WOOOOOOOT FIRST COMMENT FOOLS (:
and aww that was soo good!
but ONOEZ it was just a dream ):
stupid sad endings. poor billie.
but i still loved it hehe [: