A Wolf in Sheep's Clothing - Comments

I felt a shiver go up my spine when I realized that Ryan was going to try to rape her. The story is very well written and I felt like I could see exactly what was happening.

I liked this! It was very clearly a re-telling of Red Riding Hood but had a modern twist, and I like the idea of Ryan.being the "wolf." I also enjoyed the dramatic ending; I like short stories that leave things up to my imagination. Good job with this ^_^

I love the fairytale of Little Red Riding Hood. I love people's interpretations of it. You definitely made it your own. This was fun to read, with a few interesting twists to keep the reader entertained. I loved the style of it; he descriptions, the way you wrote it all were fantastic. And the violence of it, I liked that too. It was a bit shocking, but in a good way. A dramatic way.

I like how it ended on a dramatic note, how you never do get to know what happens. One would assume that the "hunter" comes to save them, but it's not always the case. Of course I'm curious to what happened, but I think that defeats the purpose. Lovely job.

Wow, that was wonderful! I really enjoyed it. I want to know what happens!

Ash and her granny need to jump off the window!! But it's okay as long Ryan wouldnt blow at the house. But hey, it's bricked apartment! Teehee. LURVEEE THIS MODERNIZED STORY! XD

This is short, but I loved it, and it satisfied me. (:
Good job! :D

Wow I love this story!!! :]
Update soon!!

UPDATEEEEEEEEEE :]
i like cliffhangers, but i hate the mood they leave me in xP
BE HAPPY. MAKE OTHER PEOPLE HAPPY. SO GO UPDATE :D