One Last Wish - Comments

I just found your profile tongiht and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. I see there are many others that you've written and as soon as I get the chance to read them I will comment on them as well.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing your creations. I am at a loss for words at how much this moved me. It was beautifully written, so thank you so much. I'm going to add you as a friend, if that's okay, so I can come back tomorrow and enjoy some more of your stories.

this made me cry.
So beautiful. So sad.

*Sniffle*
That ending was so sad yet put a smile on my face, it was so beautifully writen as was the whole piece.

I think this is the only story that I've read that I've cried like a blubering idiot. I dont kno if I held myself in a state of mind that nothing could touch me, but this story hit home. I've taken a lot of crap and a lot more abuse from friends and family than anyone should take. Molly, however fiction she might be, has just shown me that I can get through all this with a strong state of mind and actually believe it. Thank you for writing it. Thank you for showing me a strong side in me that I would have never known I possesed if I hadnt read this story.

okay ...................im crying from that ending Rhian to be truthful thats the best way to go happy and with someone you love.

thats the most emotional story ive ever read and i loved it hun it was so amazing your and amazing writter

Okay...it took me a few minutes to write this comment. Rhian, that was a beautiful ending. I loved that Molly died in Brian's arms. It was the perfect place for her to take her final breath.

This was such an emotional, amazing story!

I just cried my eyes out.
That was amazingly written.

Damn, this is so amazing! *sob* I loved it! It was so sad, but you wrote it beautifully. :) Amazing job, hun!

I'm in tears right now and I blame you! That was a great,very sad but great story. The part that got me was she died in his arms right after they shared such a passionate kiss (what a way to go) I started crying right along with Brian!
I loved it.

So I cried like, three times today, but yours was actually a nice cry. It was sad, but I was happy. That doesn't make any sense, but the point is that I loved the story : )

Loved it. Such a great short story.

Okay, I so felt like bawling my eyes out there at the end.
Brian's speech was so adorable! And when he turned to the casket and said that he loved Molly, I wanted to cry even more!
I knew it was coming. But that didn't make it any less sad!
I thought it was sweet how he agreed to get a tattoo with some of Molly's ashes in the ink. That is so cool.
I was hoping maybe it would be a miracle story with Molly miraculously healing and living, but I like this ending too. I thought it ended quite nicely. =}
Brilliant! Sad but brilliant!

*sniffs* I think I'm gonna cry, that was really good Love

Oh my god!
I'm bawling so hard right now!
It was such a wonderful story, and you wrote it so well, I felt like it was actually happening, and I was there to witness it!!
I loved the star tattoo idea, it reminds me so much of what Molly was like in the story!!
I hope you write another one soon!!!

<3 Kat

Sad, sad, sad... Like Brian said, life dealt her a shitty hand, but at least she got to die in the arms of someone she loved with the knowledge that he loved her back. That has to be worth something. I loved what he said at the service. It was typical things that people say at times like that but with him, you knew that he really meant it. She truly made a difference in his life. I love that you added a little humor in it with Johnny and the casket. And the star tattoo was a great idea.

Really great writing, hun!

Oh Rhian, that was beautiful. I am sobbing like mad right now, but still managed a giggle at the image of Johnny and that coffin! There's never any perfect way to die, but in some ways for Molly, that was. To be in the arms of the man she loved, knowing that he loved her too, she was able to slip away at peace.

I've loved this short story, and know that I will most definitely be reading it again. Kudos to you my dear for such a fantastic piece of fiction :) xx

aww bless her and its sweet that bri is spending time with her :) its really sweet hun x

....The next chapter is going to be the really sad Molly-dies chapter, isn't it?
Oh, dear.
I know I'm gonna cry. I will cry. It'll be sad. I'll at least tear up.
Brian's being such a sweetheart, though. He's so cute sometimes.
I wouldn't mind waking up to see him next to my bed...I'd be like, "Hellllo, sexy. This bed's kinda cold...care to join me?" He'd probably be like, "Um, no," and then jump out the window. *sigh*
Loved it! I agree with everyone else, this story is beautifully written, and although it is very sad, it is also fabulous.
At first, I thought she was going shopping for a casket. haha. I wasn't far from the mark...

Normally I don't read stories were I know the person is going to die and leave the other one sad and depressed but I think I am going to like this storie.

Alexx

I really love it!