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  • kobra kid

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    oh wow! Thanks so much everybody, I've never written anyting like this before, I didn't think I had a chance of winning. But seriously? I may continue this now if that's what you guys want? :)
    July 19th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • CarynPikachau

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    this is beautiful ^^<3
    but bad jack, hurting alex like that!
    July 15th, 2010 at 09:08pm
  • running from lions

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    how absolutely incredible
    I don't even know what else to say
    except that you deserved the contest win, and, from the looks of the rest of your comments, that agree with me
    January 17th, 2010 at 04:08am
  • kobra kid

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    That a good thing?
    January 11th, 2010 at 09:38am
  • Macy Emalia

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    i am speechless.
    January 11th, 2010 at 08:36am
  • Jimmy Novak

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    Mhm, this must continue! It was really, really wonderful. Amazing, actually. There was a lot of emotion in it, and it was very descriptive. I love your writing style. Please update.

    <3
    December 21st, 2009 at 04:13am
  • leighabelle

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    Okay, maybe it's just because I'm emotional or something but whenever Alex started to cry after Jack walked away, I started crying and I don't usually cry over ficks like this. I think the fact that Jack walked away made me cry.
    Yes, a two-shot would be nice =')
    November 9th, 2009 at 02:45am
  • ChibiMatsumoto

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    I love it!
    November 4th, 2009 at 01:51am
  • kobra kid

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    Aw, thank you guys :)
    Who knows, I might make it a two-shot or an actual story once the contest's over.
    Thanks for the comments (:
    November 3rd, 2009 at 10:02am
  • Forever Young.

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    that was fantastic! You're a great writer! I can't even pick jsut one part to say was my favorite!

    please update soon! (:
    November 3rd, 2009 at 03:57am
  • miranda.

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    wow. this was great. i'm not really into slashes, but i gave this a shot.
    and wow. i really really hope you win the contest, honestly. (:
    November 3rd, 2009 at 03:17am
  • darklover

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    i love it! more?
    November 3rd, 2009 at 02:43am
  • Cree

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    Wow
    That's literally the only adjective I can think of to say right now, so I'll say it again. Wow.
    This was amazing!
    There's so much emotion in this that I can't even pick which line would be best to put as an example.
    I'm simply blown away by this
    And first slash? Dang!
    At times I felt like I was really there, it was so descriptive
    You are an amazing writer =)
    November 3rd, 2009 at 02:43am
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    Oh My God.... This was fantastic. For a first slash, it was brilliant. Breathtaking even. Heck, I love this. I feel so bad for Alex. He really wants Jack and Jack is so confused. This would be an amazing story if you decided to continue it. Great job =D
    November 3rd, 2009 at 01:59am