oh wow! Thanks so much everybody, I've never written anyting like this before, I didn't think I had a chance of winning. But seriously? I may continue this now if that's what you guys want? :)
how absolutely incredible I don't even know what else to say except that you deserved the contest win, and, from the looks of the rest of your comments, that agree with me
Mhm, this must continue! It was really, really wonderful. Amazing, actually. There was a lot of emotion in it, and it was very descriptive. I love your writing style. Please update.
Okay, maybe it's just because I'm emotional or something but whenever Alex started to cry after Jack walked away, I started crying and I don't usually cry over ficks like this. I think the fact that Jack walked away made me cry. Yes, a two-shot would be nice =')
Wow That's literally the only adjective I can think of to say right now, so I'll say it again. Wow. This was amazing! There's so much emotion in this that I can't even pick which line would be best to put as an example. I'm simply blown away by this And first slash? Dang! At times I felt like I was really there, it was so descriptive You are an amazing writer =)
Oh My God.... This was fantastic. For a first slash, it was brilliant. Breathtaking even. Heck, I love this. I feel so bad for Alex. He really wants Jack and Jack is so confused. This would be an amazing story if you decided to continue it. Great job =D