Breathe In - Comments

That Kennedy and Lola talk made me :S
I just have a feeling they'll do something stupid XP
PAT IS SO ADORABLE XD
So ish JOHN (:

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haha is zach going to be playing with a shirt on? because otherwise all his hickeys will be visible =P
i'm glad lola and kenny are ok now

you're just 'fine" in bed too, i would know XD
hahahah JUST KIDDING.
but anyways, update againnnnn <3

OH HAAAWT DAYUUUM!
How many times have I said that on your story? XD
Kenny's JEALOUS >:)

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Haha...I laughed at Gary until I realized he was bleeding O_O
FUUUUU!
No Lola, no more drugs >_<
DON'T YOU SEE WHAT YOU DID KENNY? D:<
Son of a bitch...-Sigh-

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You should update again like, right now!!
lol, I want to know what happens!
good stuff!

this is gooodd, I want to read more!

ZACK FLIPPIN' MERRICK better not be using Lola as the "other girl" ...
Aha, I'm surprised drunken John even remembered that he set a curfew for his little sis x]
I wonder if Kenny'll flip shit xD

Update soon <333

HAHA XD
Oh poor Kenny x]
That boy didn't see that coming...
WATER GUN FIGHT ftw!
Alex Gaskarth saliva...not so win xD But still win, somehow x]

Update soon? <3333

holy jizz in my pants.
that was great

woah!
I would never let a guy see me naked without him being naked as well.
hahahaha

Haha, ooh hot dayuum >:D
Well, I really didn't expect that xD
But I...liked it? Hope I don't sound perverted XDD

Update soon?
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i really like this.
you really give each person their own personality.
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THEY'RE NOT FIGHTING :D
And I'm goddamn glad about that!
They're just so cute...together (;

I loved how you showed her emotions. I can't wait to read more. :)

It's gonna be bangin? ha
thats awesome can't wait

I like this so far,
I like how the storyline is so different to what people normally write about.
More please?
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i cant wait to read more!

Aw Patsuch a doll, I can't wait t read more, I know it will be good. :)

YAY :D
I don't know why, but I'm a tad bit hooked on this story O_O
I get excited everytime I get an update...like, WAAAY excited XD
I loved this chapter anyways :D

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