Daytime Friends, Nighttime Lovers - Comments

i love tom fan fics
he is just ahh mayy zingg:]
wondeerfulll

Yay! They kissed! Alot!
Ha… I just hope he doesn't hurt her. She doesn't deserve that at all.
Can't wait until the next update.<3

I myself would like to know what just happened. Tom was confusing me the throughout the entire chapter, so I should have seen that kiss coming. I’m guessing the booze gave him a boost of confidence. It’s the only explanation my brain can think up, and the obvious one. Also, he left a hicky? God knows what will happen if Matt sees it.

And her and Lee’s relationship is honestly the cutest.

jez tom's one crazy kid. i like that he's leaving jacob hanging there. wonder whats gonna happen next.... good update.

What! haha i love how you portray Tom.

Thank you for the update
I really liked this chapter. I'm so glad Tom finally made a move =)

This story is really good(: I love Tom!! You should update really soon(:

um... I can't wait for MORE, not me, haha

I just found this story and I looove it so far. I can't wait for me.

du du dun girls. they make a guy do crazy stuff. i hope she doesnt get hurt by Matt or someone. good update.

Thanks for updating
I'm happy she made a friend :3
Hopefully she doesn't hurt Jacob

Have I been missing updates?!!!!
Damn you Blackberry, I knew I weren't getting all my e-mails, I'm going to read all the chapters I've missed riiiight now ! :D

cutieeeeeees ;D p.s. i love your writing

It must be dissapointing, seeing your best friend for the first time in who-knows-how-long, and realizing how much they've changed into the person you didn't want them to be

But hey, at least she has Tom now. I love how awkward they were, it made me giggle the whole time.

Thanks for the update =)

aww this was cute :3

Thank you for updating =)
This story is amazing. I really don't know any other way to put it. It incorporates every emotion possible without being overwhelming. And it feels like you actually know the characters. Like the best friend you've known forever.

Update soon please. I love Tom and this seems really promising.

I'm so glad there going to see each other again and you made her so excited, but you would be, haha.
I like the fact that you hear some of the other guys during the phone call and the way the act towards each other makes me laugh.

“Hey, she sounded kinda’ like Olleh’s screamin’!”
That one in particular made me giggle, :)

It was so cute how she was getting everything ready straight after the phone call, it showed how bloody excited she actually was.

With that thought, I laid down in my bed and covered my head up with the blanket, crying myself slowly but surely to sleep.
I loved how you ended the chapter that way, it's like she realises how alone she is when something good happens to her but I like how you're working all of that in, with just one sentence.
Amazing, :)

Next Chapter:

I actually find it quite funny when Matt calls her Jake.
Matt does actually seem so genuine, he definitely stresses but I'm assuming it's because it's his best friend.
Haha, Lee makes me laugh, I've got a feeling her and Lee will have a more of a playful and jokey connection but I could be wrong, :D
Your descriptions are really good though, you give enough to help the reader imagine it, :D

And I seriously don't know what you were on about when you said you're not consistent with the chapters because these have all been extremely good.
They're all really descriptive so I wouldn't even doubt that, you should be really proud of you writing, if this was mine then I would be, (Y)

And thank you for recommending my story to people, I have actually gained quite a few readers, subscribers and commenters, :D

yay i'm excited for her to get to see matt :D

Odd as it is, I'm really excited for her now =) She finally gets to see Matt. However, I sense there's going to be some drama between her and at least one of the band members? (or maybe I'm completely off the mark)