DUUUUDEEEE, I need to get commenting this, haha. Sorry I've been M.I.A, been proper busy, anyway, sorry for not commenting last chapter, be expecting some comments off of me tomorrow because I'll read it all then, :D
Yay, an update ! I love all the detail you put into your chapters, it's proper good, :) And her parents seem like right tossers, haha, but you was able to explain the relationship between parent and daughter more, I do feel quite sorry for her.
And I love Matt ! They have such a cute little connection going on, you haven't made him all self-absorbed like some of the stories, instead he actually seems caring, :) I knew, without being able to see him, he had his down and he was looking at the floor.
I could be wrong but is that meant to be he had his head down. If it isn't then I'm sorry, hehe.
Update again soon though, I can't wait to read it ! :p
Thank you for updating =) I really like your writing style. Enough detail and dialouge to keep you interested, without seeming detached or overwhelming.
This story does sound promising. You was able to give the readers a fair bit of background information in this chapter and help them understand why Jacob is insecure, so I thought that was good. I think in the first chapter you need a fair bit of information to get people interested, at the moment I am so I’ll definitely be giving this a go and subscribing ! :)
Sorry I've been M.I.A, been proper busy, anyway, sorry for not commenting last chapter, be expecting some comments off of me tomorrow because I'll read it all then, :D