Daytime Friends, Nighttime Lovers - Comments

  • philomena.

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    DUUUUDEEEE, I need to get commenting this, haha.
    Sorry I've been M.I.A, been proper busy, anyway, sorry for not commenting last chapter, be expecting some comments off of me tomorrow because I'll read it all then, :D
    November 3rd, 2009 at 12:34am
  • rosieandtoast

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    haha YEAH
    Reptar, King of The Ozone <3
    best song ever. its my ringtone =]
    i loved the update. pleeasee update more. i need some tom
    haha
    November 2nd, 2009 at 07:38am
  • FurAndGold

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    your story doesn't move too fast :]
    it's got the right speed :P haha
    loved the update tooooo
    November 2nd, 2009 at 01:41am
  • painting flowers

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    Thank you for updating =) I really do appreciate it.
    November 1st, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • philomena.

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    Yay, an update !
    I love all the detail you put into your chapters, it's proper good, :)
    And her parents seem like right tossers, haha, but you was able to explain the relationship between parent and daughter more, I do feel quite sorry for her.

    And I love Matt !
    They have such a cute little connection going on, you haven't made him all self-absorbed like some of the stories, instead he actually seems caring, :)
    I knew, without being able to see him, he had his down and he was looking at the floor.

    I could be wrong but is that meant to be he had his head down.
    If it isn't then I'm sorry, hehe.

    Update again soon though, I can't wait to read it ! :p
    November 1st, 2009 at 12:43pm
  • FurAndGold

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    :] i like your updates
    i like how you don't introduce everyone in the first five seconds
    it makes me wanna read it more :D
    November 1st, 2009 at 03:29am
  • painting flowers

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    Thank you for updating =)
    I really like your writing style. Enough detail and dialouge to keep you interested, without seeming detached or overwhelming.
    October 31st, 2009 at 10:02pm
  • To never feel alone.

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    I wish this was like facebook, and there was a like button.
    (:
    October 31st, 2009 at 12:26am
  • philomena.

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    This story does sound promising.
    You was able to give the readers a fair bit of background information in this chapter and help them understand why Jacob is insecure, so I thought that was good.
    I think in the first chapter you need a fair bit of information to get people interested, at the moment I am so I’ll definitely be giving this a go and subscribing ! :)
    October 29th, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • FurAndGold

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    I likey this so farrr :3
    sounds interesting from the start
    October 29th, 2009 at 12:31pm
  • painting flowers

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    I like the summary alot. It's an interesting plot.
    It's hard to judge the begining of a story, but from what you've written, it seems really good =)
    October 29th, 2009 at 04:04am