Second Heartbeat - Comments

I first just want to say: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I cried when you mentioned 'Baby Deathbat would be sharing a birthday with Brian. It would be so adorable to see that live in action; I bet he would be jealous, the baby would be getting most of the attention.

I also let out a noise of disgust at Matt having cut the Umbilical cord from the baby; I'd hate to see that happen, or have to do it myself... Hopefully I won't ever have to do so.

I also love the fact that it's a baby girl; I don't rmember what my guess was exactly. But I love the name Grace, hopefully she'll grow up beautiful like mother Ashlyn; I have no doubt she won't.

Anyways, it was an adorable finish to a story and I hope to see more in the future of Baby Deathbat - now Grace - become someone with a bright future and a lovely family who will love her, which I don't doubt the latter.

I first just want to say: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I cried when you mentioned 'Baby Deathbat would be sharing a birthday with Brian. It would be so adorable to see that live in action; I et he would be jealous, the baby would be getting most of the attention.

I also let out a noise of disgust at Matt having cut the Umbilical cord from the baby; I'd hate to see that happen, or have to do it myself... Hopefully I won't ever have to do so.

I also love the fact that it's a baby girl; I don't rmember what my guess was exactly. But I love the name Grace, hopefully she'll grow up beautiful like mother Ashlyn; I have no doubt she won't.

Anyways, it was an adorable finish to a story and I hope to see more in the future of Baby Deathbat - now Grace - become someone with a bright future and a lovely family who will love her, which I don't doubt the latter.

I first just want to say: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I cried when you mentioned 'Baby Deathbat would be sharing a birthday with Brian. It would be so adorablw to see that live in action; I et he would be jealous, the baby would be getting most of the attention.

I also let out a noise of disgust at Matt having cut the Umbilical cord from the baby; I'd hate to see that happen, or have to do it myself... Hopefully I won't ever have to do so.

I also love the fact that it's a baby girl; I don't rmember what my guess was exactly. But I love the name Grace, hopefully she'll grow up beautiful like mother Ashlyn; I have no doubt she won't.

Anyways, it was an adorable finish to a story and I hope to see more in the future of Baby Deathbat - now Grace - become someone with a bright future and a lovely family who will love her, which I don't doubt the latter.

I cant remember what I thought baby deathbat was, but aww anyway!
That was really nice :P
Great story =)

omg!!!
how cute!
a girl!!
shes adorable!!!!!!

amazing story hun, i loved it ^_^

This was an absoutlet amazing story!! I knew baby db was a girl! Haha.
LOVED THIS HUN!

aww loved that!
glad she's here!

Amazing chapter! As always xD

Very cute chapter!!!! Absoutley loved it!!!

This was a wonderful update; I'm excited just as everyone is about Baby Deathbat. I hope that every member of Avenged will welcome him/her with welcome arms. I'm sure they all will, but there could be that one member who doesn't love the new born.

A lovely update, and I'm just kidding; I'm sure every member will adore the new addition to the team. They're all such lovely people!

that was really great!
Im so excited to hear that the baby's coming next chapter!
this si wonderful!
& i'm wondering about the next story; as the comment before me, I want to know if BD is gonna be a teen, child, or baby
man, great things goin on here heheheee

so excited for Baby Deathbat next chapter!

I find one mistake so far while reading this. You need a new paragraph at,

'Today, Matt and I are going to be in the studio for about 13 hours (from 10 A.M. to 11 P.M.), tomorrow, we are having a “date night” because since Matt and the boys have started this album, they have been in the studio for an average of 10 to 12 hours every night Monday through Friday and finally on Sunday, Matt and I are going to our church for the Mother’s day service, which will be my first Mother’s Day, even if Baby Deathbat isn’t here yet.'

Overall this story is lovely, and I'm so sad it will be ending in two chapters. Atleast there is another story with them all featuring in it. I wonder how old Baby Deathbat wil be in that story; a teenager, a child, a baby still?

Anyways, love, this is such a lovely story and this was a nice update to see. I'm surprised it's so long. :o

awww that chapter was perfect!
it was so long too :)
but im loving the links! wow! ^_^

I loved the update :)

So cute! Loved this chapter.
I think BD is a girl!!!

so cute!
I kinda hope BD is a girl!

Hello, love. I know I said tomorrow but I wanted to surprise you. SURPRISE!

Anyways, love, the first chapter was adorable, especially Matt's reaction to having a baby. Most guys would be nonchalant about it or disregard their baby and the mother. I think what really works for this story is the fact that you haven't made Val a person with Vengeance (no pun) towards the main character, and you haven't taken her away from the story either.

I do enjoy seeing the pictures you add at the end of the chapters - they're all adorable items, clothing, people, etc. You truly can comprise a beautiful clothing and adorable people, interesting and intriquing items.

If I was in this story, I would probably cry as much as Ashlyn (EffiexSteffie just doesn't know how to cry. DX), but I don't see anything wrong with crying so much as she does. I don't really blame it on the pregnancy hormones, though, she's probably just a natural cryer.

I loved the baby shower scene, it was a nice addition, especially since the boys are going to record an album soon. I also loved the new song Matt wrote for Ashlyn and Baby Deathbat. I would write a song myself but it still wouldn't equal Matt's calibur of writing, especially with a title so fitting as Dear God...

Anyways, love, you've done a wonderful job on your new second sequel to an amazing story. Just one question: When does it end, hun? :)

I'm just kidding, I would hate to see it end so soon. Atleast write the birth of the baby before you finish it and make it a happy ending, love.

I absoutley loved the update babe.!! It was so cute and amazing, and the baby shower was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute I can't wait for mine haha!! Loved it babe!!!

I really, really liked the chapter.
I'd make a long comment but, I'm sleep -__- and some other reason that makes me useless at the moment.
But I loved it :)
I love the presents!

Yesterday was like avenged sevenfold day to me, I was stuck watching the making of their self-titled album and Live in the LBC
You should have updated yesterday... :) Would have been a nice topping on top of it.