Asylum - Comments

I usually don't like fics that're written in the first person, only because the ones I've read in the past were poorly written, but you definitely changed my mind about that! I love the variety of emotions portrayed, and the way you can almost feel the characters confusion at his new enviorment. Not to mention, I'm a total sucker for stories involving asylums, so I love that too (;

I'm only chapter four now, but I'll definitely be sticking around for more!

As I was reading everyone else's comments I thought I was missing something, but then remembered you said that you were rewriting this XD

Well this story is definitely different and I absolutely love what you have up. Here are 2 men that keep to themselves all the time, but what is it about them that pulls them both to one another? I love that mystery behind it. While we see the mystery, they are seeing it too. I love your writing. There are a few grammar and spelling errors, but other than that I absolutely love this XD

I also love the layout. It works well for the story. More soon. I would love to see what is going to happen with these two :) Amazing work darling!

aww im so happy they are both free and both starting a new life :D the a awesome ending XD thank youuuuuu xxx

you have to make a sequel thay story was epic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

plz finish i love this story

lovin this story XD

lovin this story XD

I wanna see if Frankie gets over all his fears in this story... And if Gerard stays with him through it, and what Frankie will be like after he's over his fears. =] <3

I still read this! I love this story! It's so good! Are you still gonna finish it, or no? Please finish it? <3

>.< Gee helped him.

wooow :D yay frankie did it!!! :D and Gee helped him XD that what you call a real boyfriend!

more please xxx

Aww Poor Frankie.

poor frankie come on you can do this! xxx

aww wow poor Frankie :( and nice new background :D i like! more please xxx

Awww Frankiieee. I like the new banner by the way :)

^____^ Oh my god i've been waiting for forever for this update.

awww :( poor Gee and Frankie *sigh* lets hope Frank can deal with this as well, how much sh*t can one pserson go though?... to be honest saying i can guess like, been there and done it :\
more pleaseeee xxxx

never want to read Tyler again! more please xxxx

Yay! Frankies okay ^_^ stupid fucking Tyler.

OMBOB! FUCKING TYLER MOTHERFUCKER IM GONNA KILL YOU PRICK!!! :( FRANKIE!!! NO NO!!! :( dont let him die and make him better Gee beatter kill Ty
MORE PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT GOING ON!!!