Whore in Sheep's Clothing - Comments

Good Lord, I like your writing.
No, that wasn't creepy at all, what I just said...
Anywho, very good. :) I shall go read some of your other stories now.

Loved :D

Neat. Love the first and last bits. Paragraphs were a little weird to read in the default layout though. Don't know if they looked like that in the specific-made one.

-I loved this! It fits very well with the lyrics to the song, and the beat of the song make me feel the complete anger that the man is feeling toward the woman who cheated on him. It makes the scene more real, and very easy to believe, and I absolutely loved it. Good job!

Judging for the Pre-write contest and this was very simple, very straightforward, but very cool. The second person writing was a bit unappealing in my opinion, but otherwise nicely done.

whoa.
just.. whoa. i loved this.
it was touching, and so true.

brilliant.