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hehee, no problem. im looking forward to what comes next too, haha, jk! i almost have all of it done though.

SQUEE!! *glomps* I love you, honey! Thanks so much for the advertising ;) I'm really looking forward to what comes next. =D *huggles again*

Hey for the first chapters it was pretty good!

and i would really appreciate it if you were my beta, i'm not good at sentence formation

yay, thank you!

Keevah?... I don't get it! Seriously... I can't even spell it! Augh! And Mrs. Peeples!! (kinda) ...random dancing... Stanley... haha. Sorry.

I really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to more =) There were a few sentences that were awkward, and the formatting was kinda hard to read... instead of doing paragraph indents, just skip a line. 'tab' isn't recognized by the story thingy... oh whatever, you know what I mean...

You descriptions are great, and I love the characters already. The plot is a little slow, but that's understandable, since it's the beginning. I loved it! It's so... us! Haha, I can't wait to see what comes of it. =)

P.S! I'd love to be your beta (editor), if you want!