Temptation - Comments

Hiya, I'm one of the judges for TheDoctor's Pre-write Contest, drabble section.
The suspense that was felt by, about, the first couple of sentences was amazing. How it built up, how it seemed he would give in, when in fact he didn't. And now I'm wanting to know who did come in. Whether it be Sam or some other person. Overall, I did really enjoy this!! XLD>

Hi, I'm one of the drabble judges for TheDoctor's contest! First of all, WOW! Haha, I thought that there was a lot of suspense even from the beginning. You did very well with using originality and you sucked me into the story. I've seen one-shots and stories with scenes like this but with how you played it out, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep rockin'! You're doing great. :]

I liked that... it was quite well written! Good job :)

What? Was it Sam that came in!!!!