Secret Smile. - Comments

for 10 minutes, this pretty fuckin good!!
the whole profound idea behind it is great as well(:

you did a great job!! i would read your other stuff... but im not into slash /:

-thank you&come again.

Oh, this is cute :D

You wrote it in 10 minutes? Whoa. You're, like, pro *worships* xD

Wondeful, dear :D

You need to stop saying that your writing is crap.
Because it's not, and I think you know that very well.
Your writing is so much better than anyone else's.
This is really amazing, though, great job. :)

First comment ^^

I like this. Short, but good.