I think this chapter was full of awesomeness. And when you said short, I was expecting a really short piece. But you have satisfied me. For about a couple of days, until I spam your story comment thing. I loved the banter between Cole and Ellie and I love how easygoing Cole is. He totes just stole my heart :)
This story is beautiful. The way you write is so flowy and nice and I was really surprised by how long it's been since you've written this. It may be hard, but please try and update, I really wanna know what Ellie was trying to remember! BTW I <33333 cole. Cole is the sweetest little thing EVER :)
Anyway, I love this story and Cole… omg can he get any cuter?I totally have a crush on him=P I know it's been awhile since your last update but I'll still be waiting even though I really really want to know what happened with Allison!
HI! First of all, I love the border! Your layout is so cute. Anyway, I'm really diggin' this story. It might be premature, but I totally love Cole already! And I love his name! :)
I like the border, it reminds me of scrapbooking haha and I love Beauty and the Beast! One of my all time favorite Disney princess movies (the first being Sleeping Beauty and Anastasia being my favorite Disney princess-ish movie (its not Disney haha)). I also really liked this chapter, and I'm excited for the story to start now that she's left Mark :) ...she does leave Mark right? Don't tell me! haha I want to wait for the next chapter!
This. Is. So. Intense. I need more. Oh my gosh, I so see Mark flipping shit on Ellie, ): That makes me sad. Aaah, keep going, for my sake. I can't take anticipation.
Intense chapter! I wonder what Mark's going to do...hopefully Allison isn't blamed! I really hope she leaves Mark. Very well-written chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
I like this chapter; it gave more back story to their friendship, and I love a good back story! This was definitely a good incentive to study my Spanish and totally worth it :) Can't wait for the next chapter to see whats going to happen with Cole and Melissa and Allison and Mark and Allison/Ellie and Cole!
So please update soon :)