Lies and Lace - Comments

All I can say is that this needs to be overflowing with comments x]

I loved this story and after miles of clicking I finally found a oneshot that I didn't exit after the first paragraph. That says something. I loved this story because it was like one story shoved into a chapter. Could you imagine if all stories were like that? Hehe.

I like the layout you created for this story. The blue colors work well with one another and I like the picture you used at the top.

I like the way you described her mom and how much dislike she had for her mom at the beginning of the story. It was very well written and gave the reader a good insight on the character. I like the way you continue to be descriptive throughout the story. You gave the reader good mental pictures and enhanced things with the descriptions. I like how you made Anne in this story. Her character is very well described and a very intriguing character.

I also liked the Alice In Wonderland reference you put in. I loved how you fit in the Cinderella reference in the story as well. That was good. It was a nice twist on the story. I liked how in the end you did twist the fairytale and without a happy ending, you added a sad one... But then again, that was the point of this contest so I'd say you did well.

I can't say this story made me cry, because it didn't. And even though that was the intention of the contest I still have to applaud you on how well you did with this. Even though it didn't make me cry or think of it, it was still a depressing story and gave me that feeling. I'll just say you've got a good chance of winning. Very well done on this story.

Good, yet sad story.
The story kinda reminded me of this song I've heard before.
Like the whole time I was sitting there humming the song while I was reading this haha.

I love this story x10000.
Bahhh. i don't get why HE's the prince. I mean...UGH. sorry xP
But I love the themeeeeee :D

I like how you make the girl seem so annoyed with the party, making fun of the lady with the fish looking shocked face. :D Hahah. And she just seems so hateful. I love it.

The party confused me a little bit. I'm not sure how they could have gotten away with sex, drinking, and then just going back downstairs unless the party was really long.. But I think that was pretty good.

Ooooh, the game. :D I love the game. hahah, No seriously, though. That was a really creative way with the game, bringing up her not angry with her hurting him, but her losing the game.

And the twisted fairytale was awesome. I feel dumb cause I didn't notice it.. But you did a really good job on this. :D

Although, it doesn't pertain to the quote very well. I mean it does; but not like really well. Not that it's bad. Cause it's greaat. :D

You cheated!
I was gonna say 'how Ironic that she lost her shoe and she was all like ''who is cinderella''.' but noooo!
great story, like...seriously..

Amazing (:

depressing /;

Awh. This made me wanna cry my eyes out . :(

I liked it though. :) And I really like the picture you had.

This is so deep and very emotionally moving...I love this. :)

I love this! Seems like the perfect life, and then boom suicide. Absolutely amazing. Hopefully you'll win the contests. x]

How the hell are you not overflowed with comments? This is amazing, absolutly insane. I've been looking for something that gives you the perfect ending thoughts to a story, this is it. Great job :)