I loved getting caught up on this story. I like L's and Curtis's playful banter; it makes me smile :)
Hmm, I'm a little worried about this Matt guy. I hope he turns out to be an actual nice guy and not some douche-in-disguise. Also, I don't like Holly. I don't really have a reason for not liking her; I just don't.
Anywho, I hope you get some inspiration soon because I love this story!
My poor, fictional brother isn't gonna know what hit him! lol. I'm really curious to see what's gonna happen when her and Oli see each other again, and I wanna know what happens with Jake...The update was amazing!
Ah, the Kush....definitely some dangerous stuff. The update was amazing. I knew something was telling me to check my subscriptions first (I finally got my computer fixed!!!), and this must be why. I squealed because I was so excited. lol.
Hmm, I'm not so sure it's a good thing she hooked up with Oli. Then again, he might be a decent guy when's sober. lol. I can't wait to see what you have planned next XD
Damn! I had a huge comment written for this, but the stupid site logged me out! It's an incridible story hun and if I wasn't pissed right now I would rewrite everything i just wrote. in short:
This is written so well. Better then I could ever dream of writing. I like the fact that she watched her own funeral. It was the perfect way to end her past life. Sad that she has to end it though. That dream was horrible (So perfect though) I hope she never sees him again, just because of that warning. What her mom said brought tears to my eyes. The Bat Cave...My dream cafe! I so wanna be able to go to a place like that. Hehe Perfect way to spend break if you ask me ;) Joker and Harely Quinn my two favorite Villians! Cat Woman fits her personality perfectly. Both have been betrayed and have taken on a secret life. I about died laughing reading that Tara kicked Oli. I could see her doing that.
I loved the update, hun!!!!! And it's awesome that we get to work together! Except for the whole drunk asshole part...
I feel a little sorry for her though. It must be hard to have your whole life turned upside-down and having to adjust to a completely different lifestyle. **sighs** Well, I can't wait to see what happens next!
I loooved the update!! I was so excited when I saw that you had updated; I even did a little happy dance in my chair. The Bat Cave...that is just perfect!!! I immediately fell in love with it, and then I get to own it! **does another happy dance**
That dream she had though...It seemed like a bit of warning to me, or foreshadowing. I can't wait to see what else you come up with!
Hmm, I'm a little worried about this Matt guy. I hope he turns out to be an actual nice guy and not some douche-in-disguise. Also, I don't like Holly. I don't really have a reason for not liking her; I just don't.
Anywho, I hope you get some inspiration soon because I love this story!