We Thank the Lord for Mosh Pits - Comments

LOL Think Big! really? :p

Jayc! That was fabulous girl!(:
Brilliantttt!!
"Say yes Ducky!"

Great!(:

Aw, I liked this! very sweet!
I love how they call her Ducky, seeing as I'm in love with rubber duckies!

And to think all this happened because of a Mosh Pit!

Very good!
:}

I like it.
It's a good representation of a long lasting friendship/relationship.

The story it'self started off well, I liked the idea of just bumping into each other in the club. I found it was a little lacking in some parts though. It was like there wasn't really that big 'BANG' that I was looking forwards too. There wasn't any mention of anything in the time pass ether.

But the end was cute, the idea of his brother up on the stage and Brady proposing. It's very very sweet!

Over all very good idea!

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