Pay Up Front and Fuck Me Senseless - Comments

About time for an update lol, I just checked my subs for the first time in like 4 months and this was updated(: Update again soon please considering it is now July and you last updated in march? XD

I love the story line!!

Update please? lol

Update soon pwease)):

soooooo effin good! more!

love it(;
and that druggie talk lmao i like you(:
gggggooooooddddddddd job

I like the first chapter, it's very blunt and I like the format and how it's written. The character's so ... I dunno, they seem a bit agressive? I like that, very refreshing. This line I especially liked: He’s all about selling and being sold. And by that I mean sexually. You're not waffling around the description of Oliver, you're telling it straight out.

I don't suppose you'll be angry at me for not reading the rest? I hope you'll understand. ;) Otherwise, it's well written, I like it!

Oh boy, chapter four. Intense, I cannot wait for the smutty goodness you've got up your sleeve.
Both chapters were really well written, and definitely teasing in their endings. Can't wait for more, dear. ^_^

Ooh, chapter 3 is very, very good, m'dear. :)
About to move on to chapter 4 and I'm quite excited. Oli's quite the jerk, though, isn't he? Suits him quite well for this story, though.

oh shit I can't wait for the next chapter lol!

Update soon?!
<3

Agreed, I liked this story a lot.
Very different from most of the Oli stories on here.
I'm sooo subbing this story.
So I better see that it has been updated!

Love thiss :]]]]

/waits impatiently for next chapter.

holy moly o_o thats so detailed! i love it :D hahaha. there is nothing like good written sex & you have that gift! even though part of me finds slash fiction a little sick, i am pretty enjoying this fanfiction (:

this is really good. totally different from anything before!
its well written and i can really picture everything (:
ill be subcribing indeed! cant wait to see the out come.

Awesome beginning chapters, I can't wait for the next ones.
You need to edit the first chapter, there's about three or four grammatical and spelling errors, I'll PM you if you want. :)
Curtis' character is an interesting one, he's very casual about his job and it seems as though it means very little to him.
The chapter that includes Oliver in more detail with Curtis will definitely be an intriguing one, and I can't begin to think of the possibilities that could occur.
Keep up the amazing work.

This is AMAZING.

I like itttt :) Very well written

I've entered the same contest so, good luck to you! :D
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