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  • Monica Beth

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    Wow, I wonder what's going to happen next ... Subscribe!
    May 7th, 2011 at 04:52pm
  • ximperfectx

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    haha. i read the fall out boy part, funny (: hhehehe.
    January 23rd, 2010 at 10:51am
  • ximperfectx

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    it's a nice story (: i like Adam (: and Natalia (: I think I'm high. :P continue kay!!
    October 31st, 2009 at 05:00am
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    I got a little confused with the altering of tenses and explanation of past events, but I like the way you describe everything and make plain the bits that are crucial for us to understand. I'm a sucker for anything vaguely journalistic in style, too, so I love the way you're mentioning the different stages with 'three years old' etc. I hope you can continue this, too- it has lots of potential!
    October 30th, 2009 at 10:30am
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