A Psychotic Halloween Special - Comments

It was incredible. You could have ended the story with them both become serial killers/ cannibals. Nevertheless, that would have made it should cliché I liked your ending it was unique beside I think you are right when people are hungry they are hungry and nothing will stop them from eating. ;]

the ending was very different and thats what i liked about this. very good story

Its was enjoyable gruesome. An interesting twist with Polly in the end I must say. I have to mention though that you like to use the character's names too often in this piece. Instead of referring to him as Rex in every second sentence, it is nice to see a "he", I find that it flows better. One other thing, I found it was a little spontaneos, even if it was only a short story/one shot. I agree with the above comment about the descriptions because that may have helped with the spontanaety (sorry if misspelled). Otherwise, very nice job and I am so glad that you entered my contest XD!!!

Amazing! I love the theme of this. This is a charming Hallowe'en special, very entertaining.

I would, however, have liked to hear more description. Something to string youa long and let you know more about the main character. I would have definitevly liked to hear more story before you find out he's a cannibal, just to add some suspense.

Nonetheless, I loved reading this!