Puke. - Comments

I love the style in which you write. It's different, and sort of refreshing. But I can see it hasn't been updated in a while :( Are you planning on continuing that? Because I and all the other 22 subscribers would love it if you did :3

This is really Good..
Kinda different?

But a good different.. xD

sorry... for my grammer errors up there... The* Update*

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Dun..dun...DUN, Shall we kill the perverted man? Yes, yes we shall :3

Amazing story, I connot wait until th eupdate! GOOD WORK *subscribe*

This is just great. <3

This is pretty amazing.
<3

I like this. :)

Wonderful. I love the way you write, for some reason it's just easy to follow along with, like you are a professional writing (no kidding ;]) And I love how the story is going so far. I'm wondering where it will head from now. Hope you update soon :)

Having read all the comments you got that far I understand why i haven't seen any negative criticism, since 90% of those commenters are girls going through puberty. It wasn't badly written or anything like that. It's just that the whole dude on dude thing is a fad.
I don't like seeing talent being wasted on such boring subjects. You could write better stories if you'd just write about different things. This genre of story takes no skill or any kind of real inspiration to write.
Creating a whole new world or writing a story with elements of social criticism is what makes literature interesting to read. I hope that you at least take your time to read this comment and think about what I wrote, since I am rather tired I did not care writing in any sarcastic or witty manners.

About time this was updated!

Nice chapter.
Short, but still really interesting.
I like how you introduced the character of Seth, you're writing style is very intriguing and I can't wait to read more.
And besides a few little grammar mistakes, it was wonderfully written.
Great update.

Awesome <3
I absolutely loved it!

again pretty awesome.
mr.'I'm cheating on my wife' seems like a pretty big a-hole stupid face... but that's just a pretty big assumption from this 'chapter'
can't wait for more =)

Awwwwwwesome update.

The guy (I'm supposing) he had a one night stand with, seems like an ass. Just sayin'.
Anyhoo, another update 'twould be awesome :)

Brilliant! Really, this is amazing. I absolutely cannot wait to see where you're taking this. :)

Subbed! :D

This is awesome :)
Threatening to sell his cat to a resturaunt, hilarious.

Update soon, por favor?

Needless to say, I like it a lot.
The narration's great, and it sets up for a bunch of different outcomes (I'm assuming)

can we have more of this?
It was pretty awesome.
And this makes my mondays sound fandamntastic.
More soon-ish?

You that was bad? Really? Well, I'm into it.
You should definitely update soon.
It'll be interesting to see where you take this.
Continue, for sure.