That...was great. Lol. I wasn't sure how this pairing would work, but you pulled it off perfectly. I love that it wasn't short, either. -goes to read more- <3 major gratz.
:D :D :D This was better than the other one I think.....No, they were both equally good and hot.
Teheh, the chocolate part made me giggle. :3 I couldn't help laughing when Draco said, I never said I wanted to fuck you. That is so Draco. I liked the ending too. It was interestingly sweet and....it made a good ending. ;]