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  • summer sun.

    summer sun. (100)

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    Omg i loved this. Damon was such a jerk and Camryn could do so much better, he definitly got what he deserved. He didn't even run after her or anything. He really didn't deserve her at all. Oh and I love the name Camryn, btw(; just wanted to tell you that and im sorry that this was a really late comment. but amazing story!!<3
    December 3rd, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • hollywood and vine;

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    I loved this, Danielle!
    The man got what he deserved in this. : ]
    I really connected with Camryn in this. I had a guy that played with my head so I knew exactly the situation.
    November 14th, 2009 at 06:43pm
  • catgirl87

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    Well I'll be the first one to comment on this awesome one shot :D

    I really connected with Camryn. Damon was a jerk to do that to her and I think he got what he deserved. I mean he didn't even try to deny the photos. Jerk. Camryn is soo much better off without him. And it serves him right that only at the end when she was leaving him that he realized that she was the one for him. Too bad, buddy, you screwed up. Definitely a rockin' one shot. I hope you win and beat me :D You're a fantastic writer and deserve to win and GET COMMENTS!!

    FANTASTIC ONE-SHOT!!! :D
    November 8th, 2009 at 03:47am
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