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Eugene. (100)

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That's incredibly sad =[ But amazingly good! I really liked it! Poor Frankie, what's Gerard's problem? Blaaa. I loved this, though!

December 28th, 2009 at 04:23am

han jisung xx (100)

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haha..
i didn't think I had commented it.
butttt.....I DID!!.
Nice..
I miss your writing because I haven't really been reading much.
I fail, i'm sorry.

December 8th, 2009 at 06:43pm

nicholas joseph; (100)

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I loved it! :D
Dude, this is so good, you know, you should make this into a story, but just a suggestion. *Shrugs*

November 4th, 2009 at 11:38pm

ILoveFrerard (100)

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Aww, Faith! That made me soooo sad, but I still loved it anyway! The beginning got me very turned on! I love how you were able to convey Frank's emotions and thoughts as well as Gerard's...Gerardness, for a lack of a better word!
Gahh I loved it!!

November 4th, 2009 at 02:31am

han jisung xx (100)

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Aww. i loved it.

November 2nd, 2009 at 07:59pm

Ali.Paul (100)

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This was very good.
I particularly like the lyrics at the end, showing how Frankie felt.
The contrast in the dream and reailty were very good.
You got Frank's feelings across very well.
Overall, it was really good
Good luck.
x

November 1st, 2009 at 03:14pm