One More Hour - Comments

That was/is pretty awesome.
:) I like it.

:)
This was awesome.
I like how its written and the fact its so different :)

haha, agreed with all above comments XD you shoulldd make it into a story! <3

This. Is. Amazing. !!! You should really make this into a full story. It would be even more AMAZING! :D
The different point of views was great. Really enjoyable!
Overall it was adorable, sexy, yet classy, and was, well, becasue I havent said it enough, AMAZING!

<3

Aw! Go Tinsley! Woot!
Hahaha, you know, you could turn this into a full blown story if you wanted, I'd read it. ;) Haha.
But it was really good, I really liked Gabe's point of view.

“I was going to say shamelessly flirt with me,” he mutters, amusement laced into his tone, “but it seems you’re already two steps ahead.”
LMAO! Best line ever, in history! Haha!

“But now… I don’t know whether it’s alcohol or fate talking, but I think we have a connection, you and me.”
Drools .. I wish I was her!

She wants him, preferably now.
Very laugh worthy :D

..his soft voice breathes in her ear. “I’m Gabe, by the way.” She smiles. “Nice to meet you, Gabe. I’m Tinsley.”
Is an 'AWWWWW!' out of place? :D AWWWW!

Amazing, as usual sweetie :D

Yove ya' xoxo!

Absolutely wonderful! This was paced perfectly and kept me on my toes the whole way through whilst still being thoroughly entertaining and a little though-provoking, too. Great job- I love!

OMG!!!!!!!!! that was sooo good!!!!! that would be great as a real story!!!!!!

OMG. I love this. :') Thanks soo much. :D This is just the thing I wanted to see. ;)
I lol'ed at the part where Alex and Jack were Aladdin and Jasmine. Haha. :)
Loving itt. :)