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  • stargrl1

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    i lyke it so far. Can't wait for more
    December 22nd, 2009 at 12:44am
  • dotyky

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    A relatively strong start, although there a few minor errors with past and present tenses. A little more information could be needed to give us a broader background knowledge to her. Despite this, you definitely present us with the issue and leave it ambiguous as to how it's going to be solved, so for me, my intruige was peaked in the first few paragraphs! Nice job on this- I hope you continue.
    November 1st, 2009 at 07:09pm
  • LoveYeol

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    OMG REALLY?!?! You really just made my day! I hope to have the second part up by tonight! Thank you so so so much!
    November 1st, 2009 at 06:59pm
  • KareyBaby14

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    omg i love it you better hurry up and update like NOW. . .
    November 1st, 2009 at 06:43pm
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