Hold Me Close, I'll Never Let You Go - Comments

Oh my. This story is truly heart wrenching. I love how fleshed out you made the two characters seem, which is pretty hard to do for a one shot, and you did it so well. There are a few grammatical errors though, and some spelling mistakes but nothing that can't be fixed with a small read through.

I'm not too keen on the layout though - because I think you could do something better with the page and content background to make the banner fit better. But overall, it's quite a good read.

i didnt cry but i am in a really good mood at the moment so thats probably why
i loved how the names meant something. so cool!

Well, it's going to be very hard to put you up against the other story up right now. They're both so amazing.

The only thing... it was predictable. Which isn't a bad thing, per say. It's just, I knew what was coming so I cried before I got there.

But I did cry. And that was the point. So, kudos to that!

You had a few little mistakes, but I'm totally ignoring that. Other than that, very nice job. It was great!

In all honesty, this story is going to be tough to beat.
I knew what was coming, but I still head tears in my eyes. This story was awesome!
It was very well written; the words you used to describe things were really good.
Maybe a few punctuation marks missing, but I loved it.
It's not all that easy to make me cry in a story, and this story did it for me.
Awesome job!

Aww that was so sweet and sad. It was really good. One of the best I've read.