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  • Dear Vienna

    Dear Vienna (100)

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    The contest is finally over. Congratulations you got 95 points out of hundred.

    Composition: 20 points
    Originality:10 points
    Grammar, spelling: 20 points
    Description:45 points, sorry I just read CandyGuns entry and the girl had to get maximum on description, because it was brilliant.

    Now you can go and see the results here .
    November 30th, 2009 at 07:57pm
  • Dear Vienna

    Dear Vienna (100)

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    This is brilliant. First of thank you for describing, now I know, that somebody actually read the rules, second it was composed quit well. Third the story, plot was interesting, it kept me on the edge of my seat. Fourth one of my favorite songs and finally last perfect grammar and spelling although Be looked her over, taking in every detail greedily. You can find this in sixth paragraph and kill that stupid word. Once again amazing :]
    November 6th, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • midnight lover.

    midnight lover. (110)

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    I legit started crying.
    It was so good. :D
    November 4th, 2009 at 12:35am
  • shoobz1990

    shoobz1990 (100)

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    That was amazing
    I'm not even joking.
    I cried, good work, you deserve to wint he contest thing :]
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    November 3rd, 2009 at 10:24pm
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