At Home In The Clouds - Comments

The contest is finally over. Congratulations you got 95 points out of hundred.

Composition: 20 points
Originality:10 points
Grammar, spelling: 20 points
Description:45 points, sorry I just read CandyGuns entry and the girl had to get maximum on description, because it was brilliant.

Now you can go and see the results here .

This is brilliant. First of thank you for describing, now I know, that somebody actually read the rules, second it was composed quit well. Third the story, plot was interesting, it kept me on the edge of my seat. Fourth one of my favorite songs and finally last perfect grammar and spelling although Be looked her over, taking in every detail greedily. You can find this in sixth paragraph and kill that stupid word. Once again amazing :]

I legit started crying.
It was so good. :D

That was amazing
I'm not even joking.
I cried, good work, you deserve to wint he contest thing :]
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