Tangled In Lights - Comments

You have no idea how badly I want to hate you, but I can't. Lol still though, you are cruel. Now my anxiety for more has reached new levels, and I doubted that was possible. Grrrr.

(btw catch 22 = 21enemies ;) just so you know)

Jay's doing everything he can but Tre's getting pissed off at him for helping? I'm hoping he'll get angey enough to talk to him! Everything got summed up by Ramona a while ago, when she said "Your dad is the only person good enough for my dad". It's completely true, they'll never be as perfect with anyone else than with each other!!!

Chapter Sixty-Seven (but can bleed into sixty-eight)

I love how Billie Joe can talk to Jamie whenever he's down in the dumps. If memory serves, it's always like that. Well, except for the little disagreement they had.

Chapter Sixty-Eight

My two favorite parts were Brixton being around, because he's a symbol of what's to come for Jamie and Jay.

Then, Jay bugging Tre. He was right, dead on. Tre just needs to finally learn. Trial and error, but this time he needs to make it right. Even if it's to sever the ties.

I always say "amazing," so another superlative is in order. How about "awesome" or "more, please!" It's addictive, and if you end it soon, the only way I will manage is if you start another story, immediately!

Just sayin'

Ahhh! Damn it, Tre! Just spill your guts to Billie already! This better end happy...

Tre has to start listening soon! The tension and build up is starting to get to me, between you and 21enemies I am indeed an emotional wreck, both stories hurtling to a conclusion that i don't know if I am going to like :-(

Catch 22, you nailed it, there's going to be a LOT of breakdowns if this story finishes with Billie Joe and Tre going their separate ways!
I always love the Foxboro Hot Tubs, but I'm a little wary of the fact lots of alcohol will be involved....will that make Billie Joe stop and listen to Tre or make him more angry and finish it altogether? I'm biting my nails here!

I'm with catch22 also!

Aww! You can always count on Jamie..

I'm with catch22, I can feel my breakdown building :-(

Jamie trying to support Billie by trying to reign in her happiness is sweet, I like how he says Jason should have his own newsletter, and I know that Billie is just waiting for Tre to stop being too proud to show his damned feelings and fess up his undying love, but is he gonna do it?? Only you can let us know that ...

I love this story so much, but if Billie and Tre don't wind up together, I think I might have a breakdown lol

Thought chapter 65 was really sweet. heheheheh. Really good, thanks for the update. :)
xxxx

Oh shit...erm, how d'you delete comments on here?

I may have made a grievous error. I thought you'd posted the last bit? Eeeeeeek!

OMGGGGG ZR!!! I can't believe it's over! Fuck, what an amazing ending! I didn't see that coming for a second! Wow!

Can't believe five years of slashy goodness have come to an end. It's been fun.

But you do realise when you're a famous writer I'm gonna leak this to the Guardian or something.

Wow wow wow. Amazingly done, that's all I can say.

Dude, that chapter was endearing. I think I needed it more than Joey and Ramona. Haha. It was an excellent pick me up.

Awww I love Team Joey And Ramona!

ok, i know i havent commented on this for ages, but you know i totally love you so we're cool. i have a week of work and what better way to spend my first morning than catching up on this ridiculously fucking long story. i have managed it and was so into it i forgot to have breakfast - WOAH.

ok, how to summarise - 1. bj and tre need to realise they are both cute as hell and hot as fuck and just get on with it. i dont really get where bj is coming from with this but im sure you have everything under control.
2. ramona and joey - brilliant.
3. jamie and jay - fuuuuuuck. i love jay, by the way, he's mega cool. dont let him get too soppy. that proposal made me feel a bit flopsy. your so romantic ellie may.

btw im really lookin forward to the hot tubs making an appearance cause the last time they were in this story they were epic.

Ramona+Joey=AAAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I know... lets hope Billie Joe stops acting crazy soon!

And Stormflash, I liked that you noticed that about Adrienne - I wondered if people would.

Thanks you guys! :)

OMG I'm so behind! I love the comment about Adrienne wondering if his room at Billie's was a mess too, reminded me of previous chapters! I'm glad there's regular updates and I LOVE Ramona teaming up with Joey, but I'm not liking the way Billie and Tre are heading! Billie Joe seems like he's done with the whole relationship, that just can't happen!

Gotta love those kids and how much they are trying to make things right for their parents. Manipulative little tykes. Joey's room sounds like a typical teenagers room, if it wasn't for the extra bodies I would say you had been spying on my boy's room! And as for your previous comment, hush your mouth! Billie and Tre not really meant to be a couple? Well, that is just crazy talk!!
Another lovely update, it is amazing how big a grin I get when I see something has been posted.